Written by Jacob Ibrag
Taking in a deep breath, he slowly woke from another dreamless
night. Remaining flat on his back, he stared at a smiling cloud and
reciprocated. This place didn’t feel familiar and yet he felt right at
home. Sailing had been in his blood for generations, it only made
sense that the calm followed him whenever he touched water.
Getting up on his rested feet and standing firmly upon the canoe,
he was dumbfounded. Somehow, the water had turned into a broken
sea of mirrors in every direction. Clenching his eyes shut and
pinching himself, he wanted to make sure he wasn’t still sleeping.
As the canoe drifted forward, the glass below continued to shatter
until he had finally reached land. Seeing a woman in the distance,
he ran towards her to ask about the place. All of his years in the
water, he had never heard of an island surrounded by mirrors.
Before he could say a word, she held up the universal hand sign
for stop, ‘you aren’t supposed to be here! Turn your boat around
and leave while it’s still allowed.’ Confused by her temperament,
he needed to ask, ‘where in God’s green Earth are we? What is
this place?’ Taking a few precautionary steps back, she
whispered, ‘what the hell is Earth?’
Photography by Erik Johansson
creates a fascinating image – and the picture to go with the story is lovely. 🙂
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Thanks Kate 🙂
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Yeah so true! The image is so amazing! lol I want to know how it was developed! I like how there are universal signs even though people may be separated by different cultures or in this case worlds.
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You are a brilliant writer.
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Thank you very much Margaret 🙂
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Its on moon ?
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It could very well be 🙂
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Very nice!
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Thank you 🙂
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Fantastic!
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Thanks 🙂
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wow, profound! if I close my eyes tight enough I can almost see what you’re writing about. good job!
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Thank you very much 🙂
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Loved this, as usual.
Photographer is Erik Johansson.
http://www.erikjohanssonphoto.com/
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Thank you so much, finally have a name to the genius 🙂
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It’s an amazing picture. He actually used tons of real mirrors, it’s not some special effect.
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I’ve been following you for a couple of weeks, and I know there’s something good to read when your name pops up on my Reader. Loved it as usual.
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Miss Ashleena, you have just made my day 🙂
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Hello there! Just stopping by to say I really love your writing – it moves me in ways I cannot fathom and I’m in awe that you are able to put such profound thoughts into words. If you have the time, it would be immensely helpful if you could check out my poetry blog: https://theemptyvalleyoftides.wordpress.com/ and my prose blog: https://andtheriverfelltosleep.wordpress.com/. Would love to get some comments/feedback from you on my latest posts on both blogs. If you would like some feedback from me too, do sound it out! Thank you so much and have a great day/night/wherever it is in the world for you right now (: Sending you love xx
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Thank you very much 🙂
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Wonderful story! :-)…so, it wasn’t a dreamless night after all?
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Thank you, maybe we’ll find out soon 🙂
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That would be great! By the way, thank you for liking my haiku. 😀
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🙂
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Did the picture come before the words? Either way, they both do each other justice.
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After, couldn’t believe that an image like that existed haha. Worked out so well 🙂
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Yeah, I work that way too! It is half the fun…. no pressure when writing, and all the rest.
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Love it Jacob ❤️
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Thank you Carisa 🙂
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I loved this. Thank you for sharing.
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Thank you Caillen 🙂
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Took my breath away.
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😀
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Wow! It packs quite a punch.
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Thank you 🙂
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Really interesting story. Left me thinking afterwards. I think this is good food for thought and I liked the ending. The only thing I would say is that the woman’s first line of dialogue felt a little abrupt to me. It didn’t quite fit the calm, reflective and intriguing tone of the story and took me out of it a little bit. Otherwise, a nice read. Kudos.
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Thank you very much James 😀
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The end got me, it’s a great
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Thank you 🙂
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Gorgeous
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Thanks Tabatha 🙂
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Fantastic imagery. You breathed more life into the picture. And the open-ending was perfect. — “What the hell is Earth?”
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Thank you very much 🙂
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