Written by Jacob Ibrag
You stare at a shooting star
as it consumes your attention.
Moments away from exploding,
you make a wish while it’s still in
your peripheral. Forever gone,
floating in oblivion. Gravity goes
fishing, catching and releasing.
You wake up to a familiar taste
on your lips. ‘It’s always been
you, my reason to exist.’
Conclusion line is so lovely.. Thanks for this great post..
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Thank you π
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Love it! Thanks for sharing!
xx Rowena
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Thanks Rowena π
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Really love this piece, has such a nice flow too it! π
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Thank you π
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Your welcome! π
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I mentioned this blog on my most recent post as inspiration, i hope you dont mind:)
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I don’t mind at all, that actually means a lot to me. Thank you π
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This is extremely beautiful ! I love this .
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I so loved this one. Beauty. ππ
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Thank you very much π
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Yes! It is wonderful to dream of the one already wrapped around your heart.
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Beautiful.
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Thanks π
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