Written by Jacob Ibrag
She whispered, he listened. She cried, he
comforted. She laughed, he made faces. She sang
in the night sky, he sang chorus. She wanted more,
he walked away. She called out his name, his tears asked
her to refrain. She asked why, he had nothing to say. She
swore to never forgive him, he swore to never love again.
He got sick, she got worried. He made hospital visits, she
ran to his side. He made her promise to go on without
him, she vowed to never give up. His soul found a new
home, her heart broke into a million parts. She had
a promise to keep, ‘I’ll forever be yours.’
Very nicely done!
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Beautiful!
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That is very beautiful, but also heartbreaking.
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Amazing
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Thanks Samantha π
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You’re welcome π
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A story heard before but nrver so bea
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A story heard before but never so beautifully presented…..sorry for the earlier half reply that was sent in the middle of it by mistake
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No worries haha, thank you π
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U r most welcome
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Beautifully written ππππβ€β€β€
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I loved this ! Simple yet stunning. π
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Thank you very much π
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This brings tears to my eyes, but it’s very beautiful β€
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Thanks Tamara π
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Amazing!!
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Amazingly beautiful. Please check my blog at https://highinloveblog.wordpress.com/
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A heartbreakingly beautiful story told! Pain is so close to pleasure.
Another marvellous write.
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Thank you very much π
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you are most welcome
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Loved this π
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Beautiful !!!
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Simply wow
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Wow, another truly wonderful piece…
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Amazing how two.people can be on the verge of breaking, and how due to some unforeseen twists of life can keep two people on the verge of breaking together…
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Life always seems to have its own plans.
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So beautiful. Reminded me of my story. So simply yet elegantly written
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See. This is why you don’t want to fall in love.
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