Written by Jacob Ibrag
Close your eyes, scatter away into your mind.
Become your own architect. Brick by brick, don’t
build yourself up again. The opposite. Tear down your
old foundation. Grab a shard and stare at your fractured
reflection. Now look past the person in the mirror. Become
the caterpillar that sacrifices its bare back so untried wings
can erupt from its skin. Breathe for the promise of flight and
allow it to keep you alive. Internalize yesterdays life and never
forget the path that brought you towards your need to strive.
Open those untrained eyes and forgive those that have yet
to sacrifice. They don’t know what you know, and that’s
alright. Metamorphosis will engulf each of them. No
one remains anonymous unless they’re seven feet
deep sheltered forever in a wasteland.
This is just amazing! And it’s hit me at just the right time; I’m trying to, as you say, “tear down your old foundation” and build life again with new eyes. Thank you for this, it’s the best thing I’ve read today xx
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“No one remains anonymous unless theyβre seven feet.” and unfortunate truth. These words stuck out for me
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Great perspective…thanks for this!
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Very fluid and well delivered! I really love this!
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I didn’t get the last line.
Amazing words yet again Jacob!
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Thank you, last line is left for your interpretation π
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Wow this is immense. How painful change is….
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Thanks Vicki π
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This is… Perfection π¬
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Great post!
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I like the way this poem honors the past and builds on it. Wonderful.
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I loved this!!!
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This poem runs deep. Such a timeless and classic piece of writing. Keep going!
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This is brilliant.
I really enjoyed it!
Check out my blog when you get the chance to π
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‘Grab a shard and stare at your fractured reflection.’ π
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This is powerfully penned. Absolutely love this line:
“Become the caterpillar that sacrifices its bare back so untried wings
can erupt from its skin.”
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Thank you very much π
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