Written by Jacob Ibrag
The little girl looked at her father
and asked him why she bled after collecting
a fresh cut from a sliver of paper. ‘Some people
like to think that it’s to remind us that our hearts
are still beating. I think it’s to remind us that
we can heal and become whole again.’
I really like the concept presented in your poem!
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Thanks π
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It’s beautiful
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Thank you π
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I’d really appreciate it if you’d go through my blog and maybe like it. Just saying. Thank you!!
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I loved your poem. It was so beautiful. It sounds like the sort of conversation I’d have with my daughter. She’d always asking why and difficult questions.
xx Rowena
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Very well crafted poetically!
chris
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Incredible poem
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Thanks Glenn π
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I love the message of your poem. You have a way of doing that. You also have a way of telling a good story in short poetry. If respect you for that. Keep up the great work!
Cheers! ^_^
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That’s means a lot, thank you π
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Amazing!
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Here’s to healing π thank you Jacob. You write exceptionally.
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Thank you Ibrahim π
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Wonderful way to put across a deep meaning with few simple words π β€
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Beautiful!
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Beautiful poem and love the title!
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a great way to teach a child about getting hurt…
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Jacob Ibrag is an exceptional poet. I’m in love with your intelligence. Whenever i see the posts its like the words speaks to me. Its like the words come alive. Thank you for that. π
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Thank you Charis π
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Well done, Jacob!
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