Poetry

Forgive

Written by Jacob Ibrag

Wednesday, three thirteen in

the morning. Avoiding the itch on her left

eyelid, she lifts herself off the gray carpet and walks

towards the moonless windowsill. It’s been months since

her father had last visited and asked for her forgiveness. Afraid

of fracturing of what was left of their relationship, she made him

swear to never reveal his secret. Passing away the following day,

she would learn that he was terminally fated. ‘You tried your

best to protect me from your pain. Can’t ever forgive

myself for pushing your last words away.’


Photographer Unknown

30 comments on “Forgive

  1. emotionsoflife2016

    Powerful

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  2. iconoclasticnan1

    Powerful……disturbing……I like it.

    Liked by 4 people

  3. Deep! Really great!

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  4. I love the structure, how the text bulges out and funnels in again. It makes me think of the last words of someone I loved deeply, the title ‘forgive’ suits the message well.

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  5. Powerful words to consider, well done!

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  6. Your words are a gift to my day.

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  9. Powerful. Sad. Real. Loss.

    Liked by 1 person

  10. A @ moylomenterprises

    Beautiful. But sad.

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  12. Forgiveness cannot wait.

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  13. Wow- beautiful and sad and chilling and thought provoking.. Another great one. At some point I want to devote an hour to going through your whole site, what I’ve seen so far I like!

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  14. This is beautifully written. Chilling and thought-provoking at the same time… This is something to ponder, and then act upon accordingly.

    Liked by 1 person

  15. ambikabhardwaj

    Has the right amount of mystery and sadness!

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