Written by Jacob Ibrag
The harder I tried to be within
your wavelength, the faster I found
myself slipping within the cracks of
your fingers. Hold on sweet sanity,
inject me with patience. I need
to make this make sense.
Written by Jacob Ibrag
The harder I tried to be within
your wavelength, the faster I found
myself slipping within the cracks of
your fingers. Hold on sweet sanity,
inject me with patience. I need
to make this make sense.
Beautiful!
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Thanks Becca π
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Very profound
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Thanks Pooja π
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Beautifully done!
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Thank you π
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Beautiful
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Thanks π
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Beautiful indeed. Relatable too π
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Thanks Ibrahim π
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This is completely making sense..π
Patience is a hard quality to achieve..π
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Says a lot in just a few words. Nice.
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Thank you π
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I live it, every word tells my story, my agony
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Damn … that’s clever.
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Thanks Devina π
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Thoughtful and lucid. Beautifully written
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Thank you π
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You’re welcome π
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Straight to the point! Love it!
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Thanks π
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I love it!!!
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Thanks Meiji π
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You’re welcome!
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This is beautiful #Penguin
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Touching!
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Thanks π
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Well done poetry (but that’s no surprise as you wrote it). Relationships are tricky. More so if you started young on that. People change a lot over time. It’s natural and sometimes can lead to people growing apart.
Sad, and painful as that can be, it happens.
Also, I’m referencing relationships as a whole. It doesn’t even have to be romantic in nature. I’ve grown apart from close friends before.
I love your poem. ^_^
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Thank you very much π
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Nice!
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