Written by Jacob Ibrag
‘It’s going to be
alright,’ she whispered as
they embraced. ‘I’ll be your
life jacket. Hold on to my love
and I swear we won’t get lost
in this sea of bitterness.’
Written by Jacob Ibrag
‘It’s going to be
alright,’ she whispered as
they embraced. ‘I’ll be your
life jacket. Hold on to my love
and I swear we won’t get lost
in this sea of bitterness.’
‘We won’t get lost in this sea of bitterness’- beautiful!
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Thank you π
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I agree, great writing π
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I always love your work; great photo to go with poem.
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Thank you very much π
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This is wonderful.
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Thanks π
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I second this π
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Human love, there is nothing like it!
chris
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Reblogged this on I Prefer Books and commented:
Beautiful β€
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Wow. So beautiful…..
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Thanks Belinda π
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βIβll be your life jacket.” – This so resonates with me as the giver and receiver. Thank you for sharing.
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Thank you for reading π
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Nice
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Thanks π
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Deep, raw emotion. Love it
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Thank you π
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My pleasure
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love the analogy
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Thanks Rob π
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Simple and touching.
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Thanks Mitch π
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Soo touching.
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I think the picture made me cry more than the poem β₯.
Brilliant, as always
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Thanks Rev π
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niceee
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Thanks π
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Reblogged this on The Chronicles of a Nubian Queen and commented:
I wish my love was enough of a life jacket to keep us afloat
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You work always reminds me of how stunningly less can be more. I am a bit of a rambler but always admire how you can be so evocative in just a few sentences. You have a gift for getting right to the heart of the matter.
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Thank you very much π
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wonderful metaphor. I love it. and thank you for liking my poem.
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Thanks John π
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