Poetry

Focused

by eyes + words
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Written by Jacob Ibrag

Unfiltered, she filled her thoughts

in his wanting vessel. Embracing the

shards of yesterday, he focused on every

detail. Studying the utopian curvature of

her smile, he finally garnished the truth

that she’s been hiding all of her life.

Photography by Marta Bevacqua

22 comments on “Focused”

  1. foxesandpoems
    November 28, 2016

    “the utopian curvature of her smile”… beautiful line

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  2. Esther
    November 28, 2016

    Your writes are beautiful.

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  5. Holly Ann Kurt
    November 28, 2016

    I love your words, Jacob!

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  7. secludedwriter
    November 28, 2016

    Beautifully Worded

    The uses of the words utopian curvature, vessel, unfiltered and garnished are such beautiful descriptive words.. when I see it being used like that it makes me want to write poetry with those words as core 🙂

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  8. Holly Ann Kurt
    November 28, 2016

    How does your post keep refreshing its self to stay on top of the reader? Just curious 🙂

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  10. Life Memoirs Blog
    November 28, 2016

    Awesome

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  11. djemmand
    November 29, 2016

    what a simply gorgeous poem. The description of her smile is great.

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