Written by Jacob Ibrag
Driving a bat
to the mirror on her
wall, she picks up a shard and
stares into its face. ‘Vanity lacerates
those that hold its edges too
close to their veins.’
Written by Jacob Ibrag
Driving a bat
to the mirror on her
wall, she picks up a shard and
stares into its face. ‘Vanity lacerates
those that hold its edges too
close to their veins.’
Wow, this is really powerful. xx
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Thank you π
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Always π
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I agree. Wow. Powerful.
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My pleasure.
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Ouch, that one cuts right to it. Nice!
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Thanks haha π
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Hello : )
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Hi π
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Vanity is womens power over men and when that fails not just the women, men too fails victim under it.
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This is just too damn good especially the ending
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Thank you very much π
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WOW very impressed with your work. βVanity lacerates those that hold its edges too close to their veins.β You are truly a poet par excellence!!!!
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Thank you very much Neha π
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Very well and beautifully written. Well done!
I love the details and precision of words used.
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Couldn’t agree more
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Epic! Love this
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Wow! You poems are so amazing and I’ve never discovered ones like your before.
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Thank you very much π
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Stark! Haunting!
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Visceral. And true.
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Within a drug addict dream,
reality
born from fantasy screams…
Complex imagination,
answers, question
forever unseen…
One persons delusions, is another persons reality!
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Great analogy you always finish strongπ¨π³π₯
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No problem, it’s a much deserved compliment
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So powerful, especially those last few words, chilling but beautiful in its way as well π
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Wow! So few words, such powerful insight.
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Thanks Nancy π
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You’re welcome. π
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