Written by Jacob Ibrag
‘I need to leave and talking about it further isn’t going
to change a thing.’ Standing in front of the door, he opened up
his arms and pleaded for reason. ‘Just help me understand, define what
these last few months have been. I’ll be better, I swear!’ Getting on his knees,
he looked at the floor below as it collected his tears. ‘There is nothing you can
do,’ she gently whispered. ‘I wasn’t forged for a place like this and a person like
you. You deserve someone that is real, a soul that is capable of unconditional
caring. I can’t define the past few months, just know that you saved me.’
As she closed her eyes, an energy portal appeared in the window,
‘I’ll see you in my dreams, you beautiful human being.’
as he gets back up, wiping every saline in front of him with all his breath, he took her in his arms and kissed much gusto and embraced the woman in front of him. ” I accept your admission of tears, and will keep loving you here.” He took what is left of his heart and left with having his keys in front of him.
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π
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I saw it all happening…
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Damn this is amazing! xx
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Thank you very much π
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Always xx
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Phenomenal, don’t need to say more, just phenomenal
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Thank you π
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My pleasure
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Some people tell him to hate her,
She led him on and he should be mad at her for leaving,
Some say she wasn’t good enough for him.
But she was.
She was the best person for him.
He found in her someone who understood
Who could look into his soul and not shy away from what she saw there
She opened hers to him as well, and he loved every bit he saw
How can you hate something so beautiful?
How can you stop loving someone like that,
Even when they’re gone?
The best part, though,
That which makes the pain worse
That which makes the pain worth it,
Is that, in the end,
He understands why they can’t be together.
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Thank you for writing something so beautiful! Seeing writing like this inspires me to keep writing!
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Really enjoyed reading this, thank you π
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Not this is what I call “WoW!”
You hit it close to my heart Jacob, real good! π
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Thanks Ali π
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Now* this is what I call βWoW!β
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Wow this is amazing
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Thank you π
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Your welcome
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Wow
You’re amazingly!
The piece is.
Is it possible to repost this?
How do I?
Can I?
If possible,
Please π§
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Sure haha, just please provide a link back credit π
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Thanks. But the thing is, I use an app and I don’t know how to repost. Will I have to do it manually?
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I’d think so.
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Ok
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Beautiful post! We all have our own way of defining people ππ
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Thank you π
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βI wasnβt forged for a place like this and a person like
you. You deserve someone that is real, a soul that is capable of unconditional
caring. I canβt define the past few months, just know that you saved me.β
– a poet told me this line once. well not exactly but the thought. and this makes me sad.
Good work again. π </3
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Thank you π
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As those distant words,
flow throughout those hidden dreams,
echoing portal,
the loving laughter
quietly screams..
i lov the creativity placed upon your written work!
chris
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Thanks Chris π
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Awesome as always. You have such an amazing talent.
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Thank you very much π
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Wow!! Fascinating!
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Thank you π
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You’re welcome!
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Beautiful twist in your story that stopped me in my tracks and left me pondering.
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Thank you π
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I wasn’t forged for a place like this or for a person like you…that’s awesome, as is the rest of the piece
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Thank you π
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You make me love poetry more each time I read an amazing piece π
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Thank you π
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