Written by Jacob Ibrag
Whisk the oxygen from my lungs, tear apart the
soul that makes me human. Drown my physical existence
and adopt a steady hand, you’ll only have one chance at this. If
I survive, I’ll take you away. You won’t remember my voice or the
brush of this warning. I’ll change your fate, ridding your name
from the book of breath as you’ll become a part of me.
Photography by Brooke Didonato
Intense.
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Agreed….freaking agreed. Just gets my blood pumping.
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Really happy you like it π
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Hell, it made me happy
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Okey for maybe some. but I prefer my own will of choices and stay independent
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This is beautiful!
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Thank you π
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I like them dark and beautiful. Black and ivory. Jacob! π
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Dark and beautiful, inspiring and provoking.. thanks a lot for sharing π
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Thank you Alex π
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Lol you’re welcome, reading your stuff really makes me want to write more poetry!
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Beautiful, and yes intense.
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Thanks π
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Interesting thought!
chris
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Thanks haha π
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It’s like that isn’t it. I just laughed out loud as I read it. I swear love just rips us to shreds and finally kills us. It’s all temporary anyway.
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Whenever I read your words, while also hearing them run through my mind [today especially], I think of spirituality. I imagine the prompts you must be assembling to write what you write. I also enjoy looking back and forth between your prose and the images you couple them with. OK…I’ll just go ahead and spill all, it’s quite the ethereal experience. Thanks for sharing!!!
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I’m absolutely happy that you enjoy reading my words, thank you for being part of this community Jen π
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You are very welcome. Today is my 1 year WordPress anniversary. I’m happier every day to be here!!!
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Happy one year anniversary π
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Much Appreciated!
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I felt like I was choking just reading this.
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I can practically hear a deep, dark voice saying these words in my mind as I read. Well done! π
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Thanks Brandy π
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Can’t help but echo everyone’s sentiment – intense! Keep it up Jacob! (Wasn’t meant to rhyme but guess it’s in my blood now)
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Thank you π
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Took my breath away, no doubt about that!
Real powerful piece!
Great work Jacob!
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Thanks Ali π
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It reminds me of surrendering my feelings to my partner after being so guarded. Great work!
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Thank you π
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