Written by Jacob Ibrag
‘Why can’t you let me into your
mind?’ Because if I did, you’ll know that
you could never be mine. I’m no more than
a cage and you were designed to fly.
Written by Jacob Ibrag
‘Why can’t you let me into your
mind?’ Because if I did, you’ll know that
you could never be mine. I’m no more than
a cage and you were designed to fly.
Captivating.
Beautiful piece, nicely written.
Always a pleasure reading your work Jacob!
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Thank you Ali 😀
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No more, no less.
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Jacob always best
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Thanks 😀
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This is my favorite of yours so far. It’s so beautiful.
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Thanks Katrina 😀
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Swoon!
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😀
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Wow!!
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Thanks 🙂
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Lovely!
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Thank you 😀
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Really loved that! So well done.
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So good! Love!!
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Thanks Karen 😀
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❤
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😀
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Beautiful as always
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Thank you 😀
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My pleasure
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Reblogged this on Letters to G and commented:
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Wow. So captivating.
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Thanks Carter 🙂
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Very nice.
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Thanks Graham 🙂
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You write with such beauty and soul.
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Thank you very much 🙂
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Thought provoking!
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Thanks 🙂
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No, thank you.
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This was a beautiful thought
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Thanks 😀
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VERY ILLUMINATING AND MIND CLEANING POEM
CONGRATS.
LEAVE SOME COMMENT ON MY WHO IS SHE EQUALLY LOVING ONE
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Thank you 🙂
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you are welcome
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Must be heart-wrenching to realize, that NO matter how much love you feel for someone, s/he will NEVER reciprocate the same feelings back to you…
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Love this! My favourite line – “I’m no more than a cage and you were designed to fly.”
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Thanks Debbie 🙂
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So powerful, and in so few short lines! Marvellous
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Thank you 😀
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Absolutely brilliant. I wish I could write such captivating pieces as well!
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The words are actually poignant, portraying a feeling of inadequacy towards a love one, a fear that in letting him/her into your thoughts, they leave you.
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This is so very beautiful. I’m in love with this.
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I’m no more than
a cage and you were designed to fly.
Especially love this line
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Thanks Arpita 🙂
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Hi eyes+words Thank you for liking “Shoreline!” Peace and Best Wishes TheFoureyedPoet.
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Beauty in a few lines.
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Thanks Michelle 🙂
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My absolute pleasure. 🙂
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Great impact with a short piece!
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Thanks 🙂
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