Written by Jacob Ibrag
I keep reading the last text you sent, pretending that
there’s more to come after the last word of the last sentence.
‘Can’t wait for us to share a last name. I’ll be by you soon, a moment
before the suns rays pour onto your skin.’ I keep reading the last text
you sent, pretending you’re still in my world and not the next.
Reblogged this on O LADO ESCURO DA LUA.
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Powerful!
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Thanks π
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Looking back is always the hardest, you captured that yearning.
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Thanks Sonyo π
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Nicely crafted
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Thank you π
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My pleasure, always
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So intuitive
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Thanks Pratap π
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I really love the sense of loss and grief that you managed to capture within the poem. It is relatable to many people and that captivating aspect is really what brings the piece together and makes it come full circle. I really like it.
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Thanks Sophie π
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Bittersweet.
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Touching
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Thank you π
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Very strong and melancholy.
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Thank you π
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Utterly devastating. Hope it’s not autobiographical.
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It’s not.
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You captured the devastation in so few words! Beautiful and glad it’s not true π
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Thank you π
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So beautiful!
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Thanks π
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Thank you for writing something so magical. π€
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Beautifully somber
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Thanks Alisa π
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One of the deepest wound conveyed in so few lines…Perfect! Touched my heart π
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Thanks Swati π
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Such an awful “Dear John” that leaves you lingering on…
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your not by my side
your vibe your last word lingers
etched onto my heart
one day us together
me by your side forever
across the miles
smiles of gratitude reach out
inspired my words
your poem did many thanks
take care good health Mick E T
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Really nice
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Thank you π
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This feels like a shortened version of Last Kiss. A modernized version β€οΈ beautiful, Jacob. You’re so talented; I just adore you!
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Thank you very much π
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This is so true ..it happens with me most of the time .
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Ahhhhh.
Totally unexpected.A wonderful piece of art.
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Thank you π
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Wonderfully done! Great feeling of longing!
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You have really put the feelings in to the words. Bravo π β€
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Thanks π
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