Written by Jacob Ibrag
You departed for a little over an hour. When I placed
my head on your chest, there was nothing more than a howling
silence. Arrangements were being made and I don’t know, I kept asking
everyone in the room to wait. Even when the doctor called it at one thirteen
in the morning, I kept talking to you because I knew that somehow someway
you were listening. And I was right because here you are, staring at me as if
we’ve been separated for more than a century. And I need you to tell me,
where did you go and what took you so long to come back to we?
This is so ME…my situation…once before but present always in my head
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This gave me goosebumps….beautiful !
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Thank you π
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You are welcome !
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The picture shook me up…and the words are lovely!
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Thanks π
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This is beautiful.
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Thanks Carter π
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There’s some passion missing somehow,
but I love the scene you have created!
Love your work Jacob, always have and so I will.
Keep ’em coming π
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Thanks Ali π
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Very beautiful indeed.
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Thank you π
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You have a unique writing style and I love it.
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Thank you very much Dainelle π
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You’re welcome π
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Goosebumps…like a gothic poem…
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So so beautiful
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Thank you π
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I keep coming back for your words. they have a soul! Keep up π
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Thanks Zahrat π
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Woah..that was awesome ππ
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Thank you Karthika π
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Is that real?
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Nope, just my imagination π
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Wish ’twas true though π
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Where did you go! and why so long to return to we!
Very nice. I sometimes feel this way about my own self.
Certainly gets the mind taking all kinds of twists and turns
-IV
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lovely. ……really heart touching…. amazing…… ππππ
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Thanks Sanii π
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pleasure is all mine….. keep smiling…. ππ
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So lovely and compelling!
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Thanks Tamara π
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You’re very welcome Jacob β‘
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Beautiful as always & you have a great blog!
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Thanks Jay π
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Wow
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Its so beautiful and sad at the same time.. π
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Thank you π
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