Written by Jacob Ibrag
You love circles, at least
that’s what you told me. You draw
them without ever finishing. Open ended
because, ‘what’s sadder than ending up in
the same place?’ I gave you a ring and you
hesitated because, ‘I don’t know if we
want the same things.’
Great piece! π
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Thanks Ali π
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…to end up at the same place…sad
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Beautiful.
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Thank you π
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I am so creeping on your blog. I used to write poetry. To see such beautiful work is very inspiring.
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Creep away haha, I’m glad you’re enjoying your time here π
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Love unrequited is the saddest thing!
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why can’t i go on your page? When i try to get it this sign in sheet just show up and i can’t seem to get rid of it. I already follow this blog. why do i need to sign in again?
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There should be a button that says ‘Back to E + W.’ The code is setup up in a way that it always pops up haha, I’m not exactly sure how to change that for people who already follow this blog.
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yeah, it’s weird. okay thank you π
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Beautifully written
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Thanks π
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yes, this is beautiful πΊ
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Thank you π
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more than welcome!
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Profound!
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Thanks π
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What an interesting perspective on circles. Maybe spirals would be better!
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Thanks π
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Reblogged this on crjen1958.
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Your posts are so short, but they always blow my mind.
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I’m glad you like them π
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Wow, what a poem! I love it. What is sadder than ending up in the same place. I love how that connects to circles. So creative!!!
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Thank you very much π
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Marvelous piece
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Thank you π
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Short and sweet, with a punch. Love it
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Thank you π
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Powerful!
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Thanks π
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Sounds like there are still, a lot of uncertainties about the love s/he is currently in, before the next steps should be taken…
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So romantic π
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Thanks Anita π
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That’s powerful thoughts on the circle, according to the omega point theory by tilhard it’s inevitable that we all end up in the same place, as the beginning is always the end, and vice versa as the cycle happens again
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Sad and thoughtful..wonderful!
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Thank you π
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