Poetry

Sentence

Written by Jacob Ibrag

‘Name?’ She’s looking at my identification while

asking me for my God given, well randomly chosen out of a

hat alias. So I lie. I tell her that the world is going to end, eventually.

She looks up from her lumpy nineties model computer screen and asks

me to, ‘come again sir? Look I’ve got my fifteen in twenty and I don’t need

this crazy talk especially from a guy named,’ I tell it’s just a joke. Not really

though. I mean it is ending, I whisper. It’s a slow descend and it’s not a true

collective. ‘Collective?’ Collective. It’s a singular event if you think about

it, I tell her. ‘When the world ends, we go al-.’ A single shot goes

off. Someone exits. Bits of my frontal lobe in her hair.

I’m still conscious so, I finish my sentence.


Photographer Unknown

33 comments on “Sentence

  1. I don’t know what it is about your work, but I really appreciate and enjoy reading it. It’s very different.

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  2. Oh, my… What is the end of the sentence?!?!? T.T

    Liked by 4 people

  3. Holy crap this is brilliant. My undying admiration, with bells on.

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  4. I love this!!!! It never ceases to amaze me how much you can inspire and provoke in such short bursts. If brevity is the soul of wit, you are the wittiest person I know, by far.

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  5. Last bit, damn!

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  6. Your writing is amazing.

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  7. emotionsoflife2016

    Nicely crafted

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  8. Question;

    are you afraid to die?

    Also, do you know the collective?

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  10. I read it thrice. Oh My lord! amazingly you have written. So deep. No words! but one question, what was running in your mind before writing this?

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