Poetry

Void

by eyes + words
Comments 15

Written by Jacob Ibrag

Moving places, from void to filled. They

call it the great escape, avoiding the emptiness. Not so.

Followers among them all. Disbanding from detail to become

part of a whole. I see through the bars they call captivity,

living my freedom while they breathe to be led.

Photographer Unknown

15 comments on “Void”

  1. Jane Bled
    October 23, 2017

    Eloquent. Freedom is perception, and an individual experience.

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  3. George F.
    October 23, 2017

    Excellent. Does your poetry fill your void?

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  4. Amber
    October 23, 2017

    I like it. This speaks to my wanderlust soul.

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  6. Infinite Living
    October 23, 2017

    Wow! This is impressive! Freedom is such an internal and personal experience, also so much born out of choices!

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  7. Bill Chance
    October 23, 2017

    ” Disbanding from detail” – amazing phrase from a great poem.

    Thanks for sharing.

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