Poetry

Sense

Written by Jacob Ibrag

He asked her how she knew

that he was her one. She panned

her head towards him and dropped

the book she was skimming. Slowly

moving in between him and his bed

sheet. Like a missing piece to a puzzle,

she reconnects her hand to his cheek.

Infecting him with a soft kiss, she

moves closer to his ear, ‘music

started to make sense me.’


Photographer Unknown

12 comments on “Sense

  1. fictionalkevin's avatar

    This is beautiful – and it makes me miss Waco even more today. And I was already thinking about her too much…thank you.

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  2. Carisa Adrienne's avatar

    Amazing, Jacob ❤️

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  3. Ali Qureshi's avatar

    I know this is an old post but I had to comment. You’ve really improved over the last year Jacob. This piece doesn’t move me, even when it should as it’s not bad at all just a few places where it doesn’t sit well. You can make sense of that by yourself of course when you go through it again. Looking forward to more of your inspirational work. 🙂

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  4. roublesandhu's avatar

    How do you do this?These are so beautiful.You know i was never into poetry.
    but there’s so much talent on wordpress.Everyday i discover someone wonderful here.
    i hope to get inspired.I have just started writing to let out frustration.And i really suck at this. 😀

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