Written by Jacob Ibrag
I’ve been, avoiding you for some
time now. You’ve got this I don’t know,
this type of tone in your voice when you speak
to me. It’s got a hint of endearment and an obscene
amount of care. And I guess it sort of scares me because,
the closest thing I’ve ever had to that was in a dream where
reality was suspended. So when I walked away from you,
it wasn’t because I don’t feel the same way. I just, don’t
know if I was built to reciprocate. Maybe with some
patience you can spare my blabbering heart, and
reprogram my mind into opening up. I lo…
I promise, I like you very much.
I absolutely love this. It’s something that a lot of people feel at some point or other….brilliant!
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Thank you very much π
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This share is endearing and I love the honesty
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Thanks Rob π
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Always
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I love this π
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Thank you π
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You’re welcome π
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WOW! Adore this β€ xx
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Thank you π
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You wrote what was going in my head! Cheers
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In some interesting way,
this comment mysteriously relates,
to my thoughts of today?
chris
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I think I dated this guy in high school…many moons ago π
Sweet!
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Thanks π
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This is beautiful! All to often I have felt this way about people. It’s nice to see I’m not the only one who struggles with this.
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Thanks Taylor π
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Smooth and pleasurable
I liked it
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Thank you π
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I like the way you placed the word Dream in the highlight of your writing. I see my own work in that. It’s a nice touch
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Lol I lo.. promise I really like the last 2 lines ππ…great poem!
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Haha thank you π
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So honest and so true. Beautifully perceived and presented.
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Thank you very much Sophie π
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Why do I feel like this poem was made for me? hahaha. lol. I exactly feel the same way. </3
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Smooth, conversational, elegantly f*cking perfect. Loved it.
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I love this piece!
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Thank you π
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You’re welcome! π
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Full of energy and emotions, good poem
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Thanks π
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very nice
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Thanks Naren π
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Nice! Check my blog too!
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The words and meanings resonate with many of us from time to time in our lives. Thank you for sharing this with us. Merry Christmas. Love and Light π β€
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Thank you very much π
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Beautiful, relatable. Who among us has not been there? Oh, do open up at let love reign!
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Thank you π
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Lovely poem. I’m the opposite though. I love and give away my heart too quickly and before i realize that the other person doesn’t reciprocate.
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Thanks Kim π
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I really enjoyed the form of this poem, thanks for sharing. I have just started a poetry blog here on WordPress in case you have time to look? Have a good day, Sam π
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Thank you Sam π
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