Written by Jacob Ibrag
Standing still upon a wet stone in the lake
behind the cabin, she closed her eyes and began to count
to seven. ‘Four, five, six,’ struggling to push the last number out
of her lips, she turned around and was met with his worried expression.
‘What are you doing all the way out here?’ He asked as she began to make her
way towards him. ‘It’s been, seven years and three days since she,’ looking back
into the lake, she couldn’t help but begin to collapse onto her knees. Catching
her before gravity pushed any further, he held her close to his chest and
whispered that he hadn’t forgotten. ‘Her last breath was the end of
my existence. She deserved better, more than we gave her.’
to let go of fear of death, is the beginning of how we all live.
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This is beautiful! Very Moving!
I guess its elegant cause its simple and proceeds direct towards the heart of the matter!
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Mysterious. Great stories could come out of this as a prompt.
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Letting go is always hard; yet necessary to achieve freedom.
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Beautiful! So simple and elegant. I love pieces of writing like this.
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Memories of a forgotten breath?
Nicely written…
chris
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Thank you Chris π
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Great written piece!
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Phenomenal
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My pleasure
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Heart-breaking last line. Beautifully written prose. It made my heart beat a little faster.
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Awesome prose…both playful and profound
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