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Shaken

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by eyes + words
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Written by Jacob Ibrag

Shaken to my core,

she peered through my eyes

as I did with hers. ‘I’ve existed for

myself and, I’m done with that.

I constitute my life as you

and nothing else.’

Photography by Paolo Raeli

12 comments on “Shaken”

  1. shreyasha's avatar
    Shreyasha Jana
    May 8, 2017

    Beautifully written poem.

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    Too Tall Joanz
    May 8, 2017

    What a powerful declaration! Excellent!!

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    taurusingemini
    May 9, 2017

    Sounds like you’re finally becoming who you want to be…

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    N
    May 9, 2017

    beautiful!

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    psiberite
    June 4, 2017

    Well expressed! You have a way with words. Anand Bose from Kerala

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    valerie calamese
    June 6, 2017

    Deep simplicity. I enjoyed it

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