Written by Jacob Ibrag
I hold her in my arms and the world around us disintegrates.
The life I had before her seems almost alien as if it was just my imagination.
She carefully draws with her fingers on my chest while playfully biting on my lower
lip. I pull myself back a bit to clench my eyes shut and open them again to make sure this
moment was actually happening. She was gone and I laughed, of course this was all a dream.
It was me, this bed and a picture of her branded in my head. Morning came in and there she
was again, every inch of perfection curled under my blanket. Was I going insane? Maybe. Did
it matter? A little, just not enough for me to stop staring. I could watch her sleep forever.
Loved this. I hope to eventually have the skill to write something similar. Thank you for creating it.
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Thanks for appreciating it 🙂
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you’re so good 🙂
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Thanks Carisa 🙂
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Beautiful.
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Thank you 🙂
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As always 🙂
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Was I going insane? Maybe. Did
it matter? A little, just not enough for me to
stop staring. I could watch sleep her forever.
Absolutely beautiful, although it is more of a paragraph then a poem but beautiful nonetheless. 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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Beautiful sensations and imagery.
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Thanks Nancy 🙂
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The other day, upon the stair
I saw a man who wasn’t there
He wasn’t there again today
I wish that he would go away
(paraphrased epigram about zen)
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Excellent! Wish I could write as well.
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Thanks Margaret 🙂
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