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Hidden

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Written by Jacob Ibrag

They all

saw a smile,

but it was much

more than that.

She’s a miracle,

only secret worth

keeping. Couldn’t

keep it hidden,

 too much beauty

to contain such

a thing.

Art by  AquaSixio

6 comments on “Hidden”

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    PuppyDoc (Phoebe)
    January 18, 2016

    Aww…this is lovely! 🙂

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    coffeeandperspectives
    January 18, 2016

    Amazing! One of the creative most picture I have seen

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    Jim Valero
    January 19, 2016

    In only three statements, the poet is able to suggest beauty and mystery. The vehicle of all this is just a “smile,” which comes to imply the immense and miraculous beauty of the lady indirectly referred to. A real pleasure to read!

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