Poetry

Faith

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Written by Jacob Ibrag

She wants me to jump

into the water, knowing

that I can’t swim. ‘What if

I cease to breathe?’ ‘That

won’t ever happen, I need

you to have faith in me.’

Photographer Unknown

11 comments on “Faith”

  2. fictionalkevin's avatar
    fictionalkevin
    April 6, 2016

    This is beautiful. It put into words some of the imperceptible thoughts running through my own head. Thank you for creating and sharing.

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    alinastamboala
    April 6, 2016

    Amazing poems. I always enjoy my time spent on your website.

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    danielsykes716
    April 6, 2016

    Faith is a fantastic titled topic. Love, beauty, friendship, empathy; and faith all create good feelings; and the simple things in life; and relax people to think good thoughts

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    Rasma R
    April 6, 2016

    Loved this. Brought such a smile to my face. Sigh….

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    themagicalwish
    April 8, 2016

    It’s so short yet depicts such a long story! :’) amazing! :’)

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    joejackson
    September 25, 2016

    Reblogged this on Creative Writing Reblogged.

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