Poetry

Unwind

Written by Jacob Ibrag

He found himself

constantly trying to

unwind after herย words

constantly undid the

insides of his mind.


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17 comments on “Unwind

  1. You write so affectionately – I mean to the language. But this in particular shows affection above and beyond the call of duty. Or maybe that’s pleasure. In my case, I see what you describe happening in my very own life – although perhaps it’s *my thoughts* about others which constantly undo the insides of my mind … ๐Ÿ™‚

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  2. nycsmile4me

    very maturely written; you are quite the writer

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  3. nice ๐Ÿ™‚

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  4. Love! I’m particularly fond of “constantly undid.” ๐Ÿ™‚

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  5. Always love reading your work, so great. I look forward to it:)

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