Written by Jacob Ibrag
She delivered sin, and I subscribed
to it. Every sunrise she’d slither away
from my embrace, leaving me wanting.
I became reliant on her body, ready to
blur whatever lines necessary to rid this
feeling of vacancy. And every night like
clockwork she’d come back to my side,
molding my mundane existence till it
was thoroughly unrecognizable.


I really loved this poem, and the picture it created in my head. I had one thought, which you can disregard of course. Would it be subscribe instead of prescribe?
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Thank you 🙂
Subscribe makes more sense. Going to change it now.
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It adds to the alliteration too! Just wanted to be helpful 🙂
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I really appreciate the input, means a lot to me 🙂
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Always such a great reading. Repetitive in my comment but what can I say love this one too:)
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Thank you Alisa 😀
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…and excuse all my ill formed English in that comment. Admittedly I am reading and commenting while preforming domestic duties haha.
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No worries at all 🙂
Thanks for taking the time to read these pieces.
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Your pieces are always a joy to read! I’m glad you subscribed, for now I can read your poem on it. 😛
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Thanks 🙂
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