Poetry

Missing

Written by Jacob Ibrag

I used to look at her and think she was

my end all be all. I would’ve done anything

for that heart till it broke mine. A million

pieces scattered in the wind. Maybe one

day they’ll recollect and form something

different. Never the same though, some

pieces would always remain missing.


Photographer Unknown

17 comments on “Missing

  1. sueashby7's avatar
    sueashby7

    I love the way you speak of deception and the broken heart. It flows very well with no wasted words. I could see all those shards. Keep up the great poetry.

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  2. ajaykohli's avatar

    If you seek love outside ,its sure to happen

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  3. hrobertson2013's avatar

    beautiful broken

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  4. wolfsbanepoetry's avatar
    wolfsbanepoetry

    I really feel this right now!

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  5. Romy's avatar

    Short but deep – nice

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  6. Dave Kingsbury's avatar

    Nice one – a piece always missing! – will follow. Glad you liked my post https://davekingsbury.wordpress.com/2016/06/08/renga-2/

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  7. Faiqa Ahmad's avatar

    Such beautiful words 🙂

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  9. Abirami's avatar

    This is amazing! The words are perfectly in place. 🙂 Great job!

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