Written by Jacob Ibrag
Easy. Slow down just a bit. The air is rare in a
place like this. You’re not blind, it’s just pitch black
in here. Can’t move, there isn’t enough space. You
stretch your fingers out to the edges, feeling the oak
that’s taken you in. This is what you wished for, isn’t
it? Twisted promises, he tore your heart into pieces.
It’s been eating away from your existence, thinking
about the girl he’s replaced you with. And now you’re
in the final stretch of the final seconds of your wretched
being. And it hits you in your chest, the fact that he
wasn’t ever worth it. You haven’t even lived. Clench
your fists and shatter this wooden ceiling because
that’s all it is, a cage to keep you from living. Crawl
through the dirt, shed your old skin. Fill in your
new lungs, breathe out regrets. Lift your self,
stand. Not six feet under, not yet.


Nice!
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Thanks Aenne 🙂
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The photo is so haunting. Combined with your words….great job
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Thanks Brea 🙂
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My pleasure
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just how do you write so well? :O
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I think I’ve got much to learn haha, thank you 🙂
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Good one 👍
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Thank you 🙂
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☺
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I LOVE IT
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Thanks 🙂
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My God, this is wonderful!
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Thank you very much 🙂
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Awesome
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Thank you 🙂
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🙂
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Getting better with every post 👏👍
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Thank you 🙂
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your instagram account is just as good as your blog. Just gave you a follow @sensiblewizard
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Thank you so much 🙂
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very nice .
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Thanks 🙂
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welcome
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This reminds me of Sam Becket’s monologues, especially the last line – its mood of dogged stoicism.
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Am such a fan of you from now.😄
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That means a lot to me 🙂
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Me as well.😊
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Absolutely beautiful. The pain and agony comes across so well.
I can relate very well to the shedding of the skin 🙂
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Thank you very much 🙂
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Beautiful Frank. I love the way you write. The one about your near death experience on that ship still haunts me and stayed with me. Do keep writing:-)
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Thank you very much, that means a lot to me 🙂
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