Written by Jacob Ibrag
Shouting from the top of her lungs, she aimed straight
for his soul. Finally closing his eyes in full embrace, he ingested
her flowing energy. Her words, puncturing through the cage that kept
his heart prisoner and locked away.This was it, this was the moment he
would finally let her in. ‘I’m sorry,’ he whispered. ‘For the longest time, I
thought you were like the rest of them. Another soul to use me as a buffer
before finding something better. I never gave you a chance, but you never
stopped. You always stayed close, putting up with my ignorance. I need
you to know that, I’m finally listening. I need you to know that, I’ll never
take us for granted again.’ Placing her fingers upon his cheek, she swore
that she wouldn’t have ever given up on them for anything.
Truly beautiful! I love this.
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Thank you π
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It was amazing. Thank you.
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Thank you π
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I have all the empathy for the one who did not give up. It is truly hard to be in a place where you see the truth and the other does not. But only he has the equipment to share your vision. The eyes you saw in your dreams π
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Aww, how sweet! Sounds like they both have been on quite the journey together.
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Thanks π
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Beautiful!
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Thanks π
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You’re welcome:)
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Reblogged this on unstilledheart.
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*Sigh* I love how sweet and honest this is. I love when poetry captures moments of time. Especially moments of intense vulnerability. Great piece.
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Thank you very much π
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Genuine love doesn’t give up
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Wonderful I like it so much
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Thanks Morgan π
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This is great!
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Aaaww…
This is magnificent
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Thank you very much π
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Awwwww…. so sweet! π β€
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I loved this. I like the implied story of their relationship and the true love that she had. Well done.
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Thank Lisa π
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It takes a lot of courage in never giving up…
That courage can only b fueled by true loveπ
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So sweet! Great piece
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Thanks π
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But did it last
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This is just gorgeous. I think I have already told you, but I’ll say it again. The way you write just transports me. Every time.
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Thank you very much π
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Always my pleasure reading you π
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