Poetry

You

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by eyes + words
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Written by Jacob Ibrag

Looking over her

shoulder, she found him

staring at her. ‘What’s on your

mind?’ She asked. ‘Even through

the fog, I still see you. Even

through the fog, you’re

clear as day.’

Photography by lacafeine

26 comments on “You”

  1. nushayay's avatar
    anushisreal
    August 7, 2016

    I love this.

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  2. z3ng33kgr7's avatar
    z3ng33kgr7
    August 7, 2016

    😊

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  3. BoySlut Magazine's avatar
    BoySlut Editor
    August 7, 2016

    Awesome trinket! Love the pic! We must be thinking alike:)

    ~Devlin

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  5. TheFeatheredSleep's avatar
    thefeatheredsleep
    August 7, 2016

    definitely one of my favorites love the accompanying picture also

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    wwwpalfitness
    August 7, 2016

    Reblogged this on wwwpalfitness.

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  9. nolongerhere's avatar
    emotionalspaces
    August 7, 2016

    Intimately and beautifully written.

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  10. Gabryela Speaks's avatar
    Gabryela Speaks
    August 7, 2016

    this is beautiful. so direct and it evokes feelings…

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  11. JustinLindsayPoetry's avatar
    andisinjustly
    August 7, 2016

    The imagery in this one is very striking, love it

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  12. chris jensen's avatar
    chris jensen
    August 8, 2016

    Sight, within a blind minds eye…

    i agree, and love this piece also!

    chris

    Ps;

    i’ve just had a strange thought, would believe we’re part a new form o poetry?

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