Written by Jacob Ibrag
I like people watching when they aren’t paying attention
too much of anything. They have this emptiness in their eyes
because they aren’t looking out, rather inside. Sometimes they’d
whisper to themselves little reminders of things they wouldn’t
want to forget. Maybe it’s a song that touched them someway or
a person they saw that captured their hearts if only for a second.
Sometimes all they want to do is forget, so they take a moment to
erase what they just heard or witnessed. Their faces remain the
same, as if they ‘re watching television without actually looking.
White stagnant noise with hollowing purpose. Soulless, a shell
of their former self. They come back, eventually. Before then,
I stand still while staring at them stare at nothing.


Nice poem, perceptive and true.
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Such observations! Beautifully written 🙂
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Beautiful poem, well written.
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So beautiful. I love how you capture the mundane so perfectly and in sorts quite romantically.
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Thank you very much 🙂
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Wonderfully beautiful.
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Oh that one good poem!!
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Thanks N 🙂
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🙂
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I stand still while staring at them stare at nothing.
Powerful message and i respect your pen.
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Lovely and true.
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Thank you 🙂
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Very good. So the eyes are a two way mirror to the soul 🙂
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Welcome 🙂
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Great Poem. Unfortunately when I tried to go to your web page my security software put up a warning page blocking me and saying it was at rick. You might want to contact WordPress to see what is going on.
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Thanks for letting me know, that’s really weird
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There are so many people accessing WordPress that it could have come from anywhere, Good luck.
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Sorry, I have had the same thing happen with a few more websites. It could be my computer or website. I hope it has not done anything awful to your website.
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I’ll definitely look into this in the morning. Hopefully the issue works itself out.
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Thanks heaps. I will look into it too.
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Beautiful!! Empty eyes 😨
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Thanks 🙂
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the art, of people-watching…I sometimes enjoy it too, but depending on who i am observing, mostly…
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Beautifully written! A simple yet complex truth
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Thank you 😀
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Life lesson: weird people always have an interesting story to tell
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Definitely haha 🙂
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That chick is hot.
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