Written by Jacob Ibrag
She’s an infection spreading
through his immune system. Hurts
so bad yet he wants her to keep going.
It’s been the longest time since he’s felt
anything. He smiles at her as she takes
him apart. Won’t be long till she
harvests his heart.
Eyes + Words 
love this and the image that you have chose is very powerful
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Thanks Paul 🙂
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I love the bit “Won’t be long till she harvests his heart”. Perfect way to end it in my opinion. Great work Jacob Ibrag.
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Thank you very much Rachel 🙂
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No problem! really enjoyed reading it. So glad I follow your account!
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I love this piece, and I agree with Rachel that last line is a perfect way to end this piece. I love the photo you used and it’s such a well written piece and I just really enjoyed reading it that I’m about to read it again. Thanks for sharing! 🙂
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Thanks, glad you enjoyed it 😀
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You’re welcome!
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Ohh…this was amazing to read…equal parts moving and heartbreaking. Stunning photo as well!
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Thank you 😀
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Love is a drug.
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The most potent.
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I love the sense of dichotomy and parasitic relationship. Gives a lot of depth.
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Thanks 🙂
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Hell, where do you catch this dream,
wonderfully written,
chris
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Haha thanks Chris 🙂
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👍😍
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Great work 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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You’re welcome
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Short and sweet such a powerful piece i am moved 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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Reblogged this on MOTIV-OETRY-ANDLIFE and commented:
Poetry and Power of words 🙂 🙂
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Beautiful! Love always wins…
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Thank you 🙂
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Sounds like he’s totally trapped by her now…
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So lovely. I feel it.
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Thank you 🙂
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