Poetry

Whole

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by eyes + words
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Written by Jacob Ibrag

You invited me into

your mind. I was staring at my

eyes through the windows of your

soul, and then I saw mine. Instantly

paralyzed. Parts of a whole. You’ve

known all this time. I’ve searched

for you my entire life.

Photographer Unknown

20 comments on “Whole”

  1. edenstern98's avatar
    edenstern98
    August 31, 2016

    ❤️

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    alphapoetsclub
    August 31, 2016

    Beautiful 👌👌👌❤

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    emotionalspaces
    August 31, 2016

    This is beautiful!

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    sueashby7
    August 31, 2016

    You are an amazing poet. I love the pure beauty of this one. I would say the first four lines are my favorite, but the entire poem is my favorite. 🙂

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    chris jensen
    August 31, 2016

    Hidden windows of our souls..

    Beautifully written,

    chris

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    JGomez
    August 31, 2016

    Lovely with the words I enjoyed. 😆

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    oldepunk
    August 31, 2016

    Beautiful man, well done. I really enjoy how you match such amazing images to your poems.

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    gspottedpen
    September 8, 2016

    Interesting thought perspectives left in multiple frame works. Anand Bose from Kerala

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