Written by Jacob Ibrag
I wish I knew what
you were thinking. We used
to have moments when our minds
would collide and our thoughts would
converge into a single stream. Everything
made sense, the worlds secrets were ours. Yet
none of them mattered because we had one
another. Used to think we still did. All
we have now are traded stares and
confusion. I wish I knew what
you were thinking.
Eyes + Words 
I know, right? I wish I know what he was thinking.
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So true, first we are on the same wave thinking the same then something changes and you don’t know which wave to surf anymore. Great poem.
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Thank you 🙂
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Spectacular!! Mind Blowing!!☺👍 What more adjectives can I use?
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Haha thanks Vivek 🙂
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One question if you could answer that! May I?
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Go ahead
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Where do you actually capture these photographs??
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It all mostly comes from google images.
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Evocative… I’ve been there
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Thanks 🙂
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Strange how something’s just match what strangers are feeling. Far yet they are near as somewhere strangers are going thru the same feelings.
I am almost feeling what u have written.
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Sigh! So wistful.
You write pain so beautifully. This one broke me down.
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Thanks 🙂
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Most welcome!
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Well said!
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Thanks Carla 🙂
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Your welcome and have a great day!
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interesting
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Thanks 🙂
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Thanks, well written!
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Thanks 🙂
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Thinking within a dream..
LOve it…
chris
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Thank you Chris 😀
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Most kindedly…
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So much intense…in your writing pieces☺ by the way wonderfully written
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Thank you very much 🙂
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Stunning.
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Thank you 😀
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sounds as though the characters are drifting apart, and this still didn’t happen overnight, something must’ve happened between them, to cause this separation of their state of minds…very well written indeed.
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Really lovely
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Thank you 🙂
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Both the photo and the poem
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So beautiful
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Thanks 🙂
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This poem is amazing!
I have experienced something similar in my life and this describes it perfectly.
I also love how the sentences are perfectly lined up so they make a half-circle!
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Thank you very much 😀
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Yes! I wish I knew what he was thinking. However, we were separated by distance.
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