Poetry

Touch

Written by Jacob Ibrag

Time stood still as soon as she appeared out of thin

 air. Dropping his favorite flavored ice cream to the ground,

the boy was struck with paralysis. Looking over her shoulder, she

 finally turned around to address him. As she began to walk, a bolt of

lightening would follow after each of her steps. He had just celebrated

his ninth birthday and yet he had discovered the true embodiment of a

word older people pretended to understand almost immediately; love.

 Fighting to compose himself, he tried to say anything so she wouldn’t

leave. Yet before he could make a noise, the brown eyed girl touched his

face and disappeared instantly. Stealing the boys future, his next twenty

years were almost a blur. When his eyes were closed, all he saw was her.

Depression would seep into his soul as he grew older. Forever obsessed

 with the vanishing girls touch, it was the last thing he pictured when his

heart had given up. Waking up into another place, he realized that he

wasn’t the old man from yesterday. He was a kid again with a familiar

 touch upon his skin. It was her, the girl that had disappeared. Before

he could make a sound, she handed him his favorite flavored ice

cream and whispered, ‘I guess we’re finally even now.’


Photographer Unknown

 

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36 comments on “Touch

  1. I really loved this. Emotion tied with some elements of fantasy and the fantastic. Very gripping.

    Liked by 5 people

  2. Excellent piece.

    Liked by 3 people

  3. I really gushed over this one. Absolutely loved it. So much emotion from the nine-year-old discovering love than losing it and losing his life–so to speak–because of it. Then finding himself again. Such beauty.

    Liked by 4 people

  4. Behind perfection in this piece

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  5. Wow. Loved this lots. I didn’t see that ending coming at all; it was haunting and forced another couple reads to really appreciate the essence. Well done.

    Liked by 4 people

  6. so beautiful!! I Loved it!

    Liked by 3 people

  7. Deliberately breathy to the last word. Loved it!

    Liked by 4 people

  8. The words seeped, right through my eyes, into my heart. I was touched!

    Liked by 4 people

  9. I love the twist of this poem. It gives me such a beautiful essence of love, and goodbyes. Thank you for such great imagery. 🙂

    Liked by 4 people

  10. Beautifully written!

    chris

    Liked by 3 people

  11. Beautiful! I wish I could say more but it’s simply beautiful. Well done!

    Liked by 4 people

  12. Amazing piece Jacob!

    Liked by 3 people

  13. This is beautiful and fantastically emotional

    Liked by 2 people

  14. Captivating! Loved it!

    Liked by 3 people

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