Written by Jacob Ibrag
Yesterday you asked me what
I wanted for my birthday. Didn’t
really know how to respond because,
well look at you. The day we met, I woke
up from my perpetual never ending dream
of a routine. Today I realized that there is
just one thing I desperately need. It’s for
you to forever be the first vessel I see
when I wake. You taught me how to
breathe, and never gave up on we.
Eyes + Words 
Great line: “The day we met, I woke up from my perpetual never ending dream of a routine.”
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This is absolutely beautiful.
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Thanks Crimson 🙂
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Beautiful!
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Thanks you 😀
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Stunning , loved it.
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Thanks you 🙂
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Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh…..just what we women want to hear 🙂
love
thanks for reading my poem and thus sending me here.
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Learning to breathe?
chris
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Sometimes you forget how to.
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Nice!
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Thanks Tom 🙂
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Curious of your word choice of, “vessel.”
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I’m happy you picked that up 🙂
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Really beautiful!
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Beautiful poem. Wish someone could love me like this 🙂
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So beautiful.
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You’re welcome.
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Lovely
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Thanks Martian 🙂
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Welcome dude/dudette😀
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Love before Coffee!!
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Hmmm- Beautiful visit into love through the mind of a woman. 🙂
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Reminds me of “Room with a view.” When you are part of a deep and caring relationship, everything else is secondary.
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Sounds like you’d found that someone you can commit to for life, it’s good, being able to feel so intimate and safe with a certain someone, isn’t it…
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I actually thought I did once, that was a long while ago.
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wow, very touching.
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Thanks Lena 🙂
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Reblogged this on Rytha Ephua.
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Some great lines in this one. For example:
“The day we met, I woke
up from my perpetual never ending dream
of a routine”
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Reblogged this on La Petit Muse and commented:
Oh yes to the mushiness! ❤
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Lovely. I remember feeling like that too !
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Hi Eyes + Words. Now that I am certain no female I have ever known would think that thought! Truly nice for those who have had that sentiment expressed! Thank you for liking my poem “Traffic!” Peace and Best Wishes. The Foureyed Poet.
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Simplistic awesomeness!!
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How romantic. Your deep love for her seems almost painful. I hope she feels the same about you. I interpreted this as something you are experiencing now.
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Thanks Nancy, this is actually pure fiction at the moment haha 🙂
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Nice idea of someone waking up on the day he met someone.
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WOW!!!!!! This post is sooo beautiful!!!!! I truly felt the love you had for that woman! Amazing and thank you for sharing!
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Thank you very much 🙂
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Thank you!
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