Poetry

Become

Written by Jacob Ibrag

The little girl looked at her father

and asked him why she bled after collecting

a fresh cut from a sliver of paper. ‘Some people

like to think that it’s to remind us that our hearts

are still beating. I think it’s to remind us that

we can heal and become whole again.’


Photographer Unknown

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31 comments on “Become

  1. I really like the concept presented in your poem!

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  2. It’s beautiful

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  3. I loved your poem. It was so beautiful. It sounds like the sort of conversation I’d have with my daughter. She’d always asking why and difficult questions.
    xx Rowena

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  4. Very well crafted poetically!

    chris

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  5. glennthomasspokenart

    Incredible poem

    Like

  6. I love the message of your poem. You have a way of doing that. You also have a way of telling a good story in short poetry. If respect you for that. Keep up the great work!

    Cheers! ^_^

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  7. Ibrahim Abdullah

    Here’s to healing 🙂 thank you Jacob. You write exceptionally.

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  8. Wonderful way to put across a deep meaning with few simple words 🙂 ❤

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  11. Beautiful poem and love the title!

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  12. a great way to teach a child about getting hurt…

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  13. Jacob Ibrag is an exceptional poet. I’m in love with your intelligence. Whenever i see the posts its like the words speaks to me. Its like the words come alive. Thank you for that. 😍

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  14. Well done, Jacob!

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