Poetry

Care

Written by Jacob Ibrag

‘Where is all of this

going?’ She looked at him

as he began to get dressed.

Defeated with his lethargic

reaction, she took his hand

and guided it to her chest.

‘It’s breaking in front of

you, do you even care?’


Photographer Unknown

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52 comments on “Care

  1. Beautiful poem.

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  2. This piece is very strong in just a few words. I’m a big fan of this one.

    Liked by 4 people

  3. Wow! OMG I love this👍💯💯💯💯💯💯💯

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  4. Crisp yet Awesome!!☺👍

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  5. I gasped when I read the last line, this is amazing.

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  6. I love it srsly i really do

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  7. few words….powerful message. love it! happy monday, you!

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  8. Simply beautiful and powerful.

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  9. It breaks my heart ,so relatable

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  10. I was able to feel the words…powerful.

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  11. Oh wow. That hurts in the feels. I could feel her heart breaking. 😦

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  12. This is so deep

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  14. Complete simplicity and complexity of the moment. I love it.

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  15. I love the way this uses so few words to capture a brief but critical moment

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  16. Wow. Goosebumps. Such a beautiful tear-jerker. Well done.

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  17. joejackson

    Reblogged this on Creative Writing Reblogged.

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  18. This reminds me of “This Love” by Maroon 5. I love the concept of this piece.

    – Reupac

    reupac.wordpress.com

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  19. Brief…hard hitting. 💔

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  20. Awesome… I could sense the emotion..

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  21. Really enjoying your writing. Truly engaging! And thanks for acknowledging my blog. I am new to WordPress and learning more and more each day. Cheers! >Kevin<

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