Poetry

Break

Written by Jacob Ibrag

You used to be the

four walls that held up

my existence. I became

dependent while you

began to break.


Photographer Unknown

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26 comments on “Break

  1. How do you write so well? Where do you get the idea from?

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  2. Beautifully written!

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  3. Beautiful an simple!

    chris

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  4. Loved it ! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  5. I have been there and experienced this one!

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  6. Too much to handle. ๐Ÿ’”

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  8. Grandtrines

    Reblogged this on Orthometry.

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  9. Reminds me of that song from Rent, the musical. I will be your house. Something like that.

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  10. If only we took more time to reflect when the world we live in looks fine on the visible layer.

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  11. I can relate to this all too well, but it is beautifully expressed. Jacob has done it again!

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  12. In very few words you made a very beautiful writing. I write in simple language & the liars who want to take writing from me too, groups who since my childhood did nothing but harm say I lack imagination & use a 4th grade vocabulary! I wonder my very beautiful friend & writer if they read your very simple & beautiful piece would they accuse you too of the same things?!
    I salute the beauty in you & your writing, bless you.

    Let’s keep writing beautifully , & for the haters & naysayers I say: ‘The dogs bark, but the caravan goes on.’

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  13. YOU were not made of stone..
    Thank god! For that..
    U broke down…
    Molding my existence

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