Written by Jacob Ibrag
Coming to a pause in the
middle of a road, he closed his
eyes and tried to remember her
voice. ‘Never believed that we’d
get this far, yet you did. I’d give
anything for you to see this. I’d
sell my soul for you to be here.’
Pause
Oh, this brings up such emotions. For me, I often wish my best friend, my Gram could still be with me to see and share things with. Lovely!
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Thank you very much 🙂
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Sounds like the character is missing someone with whom s/he can share her/his life with, such a great loss, that someone must experience, i’m deeply touched…
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Your work is always beautifully evocative. It also maintains a sense of mystery– we only know that she is gone and long to know more.
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That means a lot, thank you 😀
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When we love someone… fulfilling their dreams becomes a quest for us…☺
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super
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Thanks 🙂
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This is absolutely gorgeous.
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Thank you Nicole 🙂
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It is a monumental achievement when two hearts still beats as one no matter how much they have gone throughout.
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i love you.
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and I you 🙂
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I love places such as that one. Definitely a place to share with lost souls!
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Wow !
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😀
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Excellent work.
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Thank you 🙂
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Such powerful lines. They made me literally, ‘pause’. 🙂
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Thank you 😀
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Wow this is so sad right away but it’s so good! I love your posts! Maybe you can take a look at my new blog I started recently and I’d be happy to exchange likes on posts we actually like of eachothers and a follow
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Thank you very much 😀
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You’re welcome!
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So lovely!! I look forward to reading more of your thoughts..
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Thank you 🙂
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Beautiful words. Thank you 🙂 ❤
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Thank you very much 🙂
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