Poetry

Eternity

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Written by Jacob Ibrag

Sheltered in your arms.

Dependence has infected me.

Throw away the antibiotic, I’ll

take the disease. Reject reality,

this will be my eternity.

Photographer Unknown

14 comments on “Eternity”

  2. chris jensen's avatar
    chris jensen
    November 16, 2016

    Unless there is magick…

    Nicely written chris

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  3. taurusingemini's avatar
    taurusingemini
    November 17, 2016

    and that would be, how someone loses oneself in love, and, it will be, next to impossible, for the person, to get back out again…

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  4. The Rambling Writer's avatar
    Life Memoirs Blog
    November 17, 2016

    Disease always brings negative effects until a person don’t stand up for fight

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  5. vishal4u's avatar
    vishal4u
    November 17, 2016

    Wow you have expressed love and its effect so beautifully. Great poem.

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    DF
    November 17, 2016

    Very beautifully written!

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    youniverse
    November 18, 2016

    Dude.. this is amazingly beautiful!! I love it!!💙

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    Rob
    November 19, 2016

    I know that feeling

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