Poetry

Focused

Written by Jacob Ibrag

Unfiltered, she filled her thoughts

in his wanting vessel. Embracing the

shards of yesterday, he focused on every

detail. Studying the utopian curvature of

her smile, he finally garnished the truth

that she’s been hiding all of her life.


Photography by Marta Bevacqua

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22 comments on “Focused

  1. “the utopian curvature of her smile”… beautiful line

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  2. Your writes are beautiful.

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Holly Ann Kurt

    I love your words, Jacob!

    Liked by 2 people

  4. Beautifully Worded

    The uses of the words utopian curvature, vessel, unfiltered and garnished are such beautiful descriptive words.. when I see it being used like that it makes me want to write poetry with those words as core 🙂

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  5. Holly Ann Kurt

    How does your post keep refreshing its self to stay on top of the reader? Just curious 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  6. what a simply gorgeous poem. The description of her smile is great.

    Liked by 1 person

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