Poetry

Lie

Written by Jacob Ibrag

I told you that I knew

what I wanted. What if that

was a lie? What if I told you that

I could picture my existence without

your ocean pale eyes? Would you

still stand by me while I tried

to figure out my life?


Photographer Unknown

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28 comments on “Lie

  1. right to the heart! absolutely love it!

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  2. Very nice. In line with a poem of mine – confession.

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  3. Nice ponderance

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  4. Lovely work!

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  5. My God I love this! So deliciously short and poignant. And every single time, you pair your work with such amazing visual art too. So consistent!

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  6. Yes, nice ponderance.

    What happened? I read this blog an hour ago and now it appears again, with the original amount of likes and comments. How does this work? Is it possible to reblog your own work without “rebloggging”?

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  7. Honesty to the core, ty for sharing ๐Ÿ™‚

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  8. Love the perspective in wich it was written๐Ÿ”จ๐Ÿ”‘๐Ÿ”“

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  9. Fallen Saint

    Beautiful and whoever it is definitely should ๐Ÿ™‚

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  10. i don’t know, would you?

    a bug and a stage, tis
    swimming in fear of love…

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    • I am honestly not sure, it’s truly the power of the situation.

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    • The above comment, has been altered, now that does say much for wordpress!

      i can’t remember right the moment, do to unexplainable situations, nonetheless when my long time memories reach my frontal lobe, it will be there out front an honest!

      (i don’t know, would you?)

      Trapped on a stage,

      tis swimming in fear of love….)

      Reference to an old family friend!

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  11. To wait for the true love an do believe that if it belongs to you, it will come back is the essence of love.
    So I guess he/she will wait if it means so much.
    Greta post and a lovely pic too.

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  12. Reblogged this on PoArtry.

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  13. Beautiful poetry, I am in that path of figuring out my life but those close to me seem not to understand me, they simply can’t understand what is there to be discovered when you can just follow the norm. But I believe each one of us has a purpose in this life and we only get to realize full happiness and fulfillment in life when we get to know ourselves better and discover our passions. Your poetry is indeed inspirational

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