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Face

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by eyes + words
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Written by Jacob Ibrag

Driving a bat

to the mirror on her

wall, she picks up a shard and

stares into its face. ‘Vanity lacerates

those that hold its edges too

close to their veins.’

Photographer Unknown

39 comments on “Face”

  1. Fallen Saint's avatar
    Fallen Saint
    December 12, 2016

    Wow, this is really powerful. xx

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  2. saynotoclowns's avatar
    saynotoclowns
    December 12, 2016

    I agree. Wow. Powerful.

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  3. Rhyme In Time's avatar
    Rhyme In Time
    December 12, 2016

    Ouch, that one cuts right to it. Nice!

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  7. XsZ Studioz's avatar
    Ohmz
    December 12, 2016

    Vanity is womens power over men and when that fails not just the women, men too fails victim under it.

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  8. domainofshane23's avatar
    domainofshane23
    December 12, 2016

    This is just too damn good especially the ending

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  9. Neha Jain's avatar
    Neha Jain
    December 12, 2016

    WOW very impressed with your work. ‘Vanity lacerates those that hold its edges too close to their veins.’ You are truly a poet par excellence!!!!

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  10. sehrish's avatar
    sehrish
    December 12, 2016

    Very well and beautifully written. Well done!
    I love the details and precision of words used.

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  12. lakiya03's avatar
    lakiya03
    December 12, 2016

    Wow! You poems are so amazing and I’ve never discovered ones like your before.

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  13. VJ's avatar
    V.J.
    December 12, 2016

    Stark! Haunting!

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  14. mitchteemley's avatar
    mitchteemley
    December 12, 2016

    Visceral. And true.

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  15. chris jensen's avatar
    chris jensen
    December 12, 2016

    Within a drug addict dream,
    reality
    born from fantasy screams…
    Complex imagination,
    answers, question
    forever unseen…

    One persons delusions, is another persons reality!

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  16. lionofjudahtv's avatar
    poetryinspired
    December 12, 2016

    Great analogy you always finish strong🔨🎳💥

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  17. sppeac1987's avatar
    sppeac1987
    December 13, 2016

    So powerful, especially those last few words, chilling but beautiful in its way as well 🙂

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  18. Nancy's avatar
    Nancy J
    December 13, 2016

    Wow! So few words, such powerful insight.

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    devereaux frazier
    December 13, 2016

    Reblogged this on Creative Writing Reblogged.

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