Written by Jacob Ibrag
‘You’re with me, but
your mind is somewhere else,
isn’t it?’ Partly confused by her question,
he asks her to elaborate. ‘I don’t think I need to.
Truth is that no one really belongs to one another or
owes each other a thing.’ Placing a ring on the table, she
gets up from the chair and continues, ‘sometimes we
forget and, I want to thank you for reminding
me. At the end of the day, we’re
only temporary.’
I think’ sad, moving, what a pity’. An impressive post, Jacob.
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Thanks Roland π
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Makes me think of a song I like. It’s hard coming to terms with this reality sometimes but it’s important not to waste too much time in temporary situations. Nicely put
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have to say…one of the best break-up lines I’ve heard.
I thought it was fabulous! Made me smile π real big!
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Really good! This website has really inspired me to write about how I’m feeling. This blog has really helped, so thanks.
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So happy that it has π
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I enjoy your words so much!
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Thanks Laura π
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Arranged feelings? I love the story. π
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Nice work.
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No one ever belongs to us, people just pass by our lives, leaving good and bad things… I feel we just have to love each other and enjoy love while we can. Maybe, one day, we can find someone who will be by our side for a very long time, but that person is never ours either.
I loved this piece, by the way.
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Thank you very much π
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Phenomenal
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Thanks π
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My pleasure
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This is outstanding ππ»
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Not a nice feeling… Been there.
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Very true, though not a reality that we like to accept when we fear being alone.
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Reblogged this on Creative Writing Reblogged.
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Hi eyes+words. So true! Thank you for liking “Life Then Was Hard!” Peace and Best Wishes. TheFoureyedPoet.
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The use of irony is very poignant. Anand Bose from Kerala
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Thanks Anand π
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