Written by Jacob Ibrag
You used to be right about me. For years I believed
in the limits of my ceiling as I readily settled for the mundane
and empty. You’d call me ‘Body bag’ because of how quick I let
my life get out of hand. I’d lay around for weeks at a time, dazed
from digesting random reality television about nothing. I wanted
to be just like you, to be reckless and be alright with not knowing
what was next. Well today was graduation. I picked up where you
left off and made it all the way up to Heavens Cliff. If you were to
stretch your fingers passed the edge and towards the rising sun, I
swear that you’d find the sole reason for seeing. You used to be
right about me and it seems as if we’ve switched places. You
know where I’ll be next. I’ll wait for you, just like you did.
This is a really awesome write. The perseverance of the soul
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Thanks Rob π
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Beautiful! ππ»
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To say ‘lovely’, it would be an understatement.
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Thank you π
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Nice!
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Awe!
lov
chris
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Thanks Chris π
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Beautifully presented
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Thank you π
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I love the compassion in this. Nicely done.
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Thank you Ali π
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I always enjoy reading your work.
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I’m really glad that you do π
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Reblogged this on CRAIN'S COMMENTS and commented:
I really like this. Climb or die.
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All of us can easily relate to the struggle, you have beautifully presented. Excellent Work!
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Thank you very much π
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