Poetry

Scheme

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Written by Jacob Ibrag

Crossing her arms, she asked

me to convince her to stay. What’s the

point though? She’s made up her mind and

erased me from it. Psyche defaulted to when

we were a simple contemplation rather

than a miscalculated scheme.

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21 comments on “Scheme”

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    boranaroshni
    January 16, 2017

    Woow beautifully written!!!!

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  3. vidur sahdev's avatar
    vidur sahdev
    January 16, 2017

    Amazing words Jacob!

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    Soft Needles in Sharp Places
    January 16, 2017

    Beautiful

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    Rob @ justruminating.blog
    January 16, 2017

    Sometimes someone is not thinking clearly and makes a bad decision that they think is a good one. I wonder at what point do we default to self-preservation? Your post begs the reader to contemplate this.

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    Tye
    January 16, 2017

    I love this. Beautifully done.

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    Mick Talbot
    January 16, 2017

    I’m contemplating
    should I give thanks of course many
    hope it all works out

    Take care,

    Mick

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