Poetry

Universe

Written by Jacob Ibrag

He looked out the window and glanced

back at her, ‘it’s alright, doesn’t really matter what

I think in the grand scheme of things.’ Grazing the side of

her neck with his content fingertips, he walked towards his

clothing and began to pack. ‘So you, don’t care about-,’ cutting

her off mid sentence, he swears that he forgives her, that this

was meant to happen exactly the way that it did. ‘Universes

are forged through explosions, and I guess that it took

me to form your universe within him.’


Photographer Unknown

24 comments on “Universe

  1. D e a h C a l d w e l l's avatar

    Love this concept!

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  2. Tye's avatar

    What an excellent and mature way to look at things! I liked this one a lot!

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  3. Macxermillio's avatar

    That is really deep.
    I don’t ever want to be in a position like that. I rather be the universe that get born from the explosion. Hahaha.
    Jacob kills it again.

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  4. Durga's avatar

    Wow! That surely is one way of looking at it. Nice one 🙂

    Liked by 2 people

  5. m's avatar

    heartbreaking yet beautiful ❤️

    Liked by 2 people

  6. chris jensen's avatar

    Beautifully expressed through a metaphor…

    hugs chris

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  7. thelady302's avatar

    Shatters unapologetically

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  8. Greedy blogger's avatar

    I go speechless reading you!

    Liked by 1 person

  9. KaseyGruenewald's avatar
    KaseyGruenewald

    Lovely!! Love it.

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  10. Acrylic-On-Verse's avatar

    This is beautiful.I feel this is a refreshing perspective on fate .bless you

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