Poetry

Deliver

Written by Jacob Ibrag

‘I haven’t been able to think clearly in several

weeks. My mind has been clouded and I can’t figure out

the reason,’ I noted as my mom looked at her own reflection

in the screaming kettle. Finally turning off the stove, she prepared

a cup of white cherry tea and handed it to me. As I took a few cautious

sips, she sat by my side and asked me to listen carefully, ‘because once

I share this with you, I won’t ever be able to remember. Take care

of these words, and deliver those clouds to their makers.’


Photography by Devushka Peyzazh

42 comments on “Deliver

  1. willowwrites's avatar

    touchingly soft. I really like this one 🙂

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  2. Tanushree's avatar

    Wow!!! Heart Touching.. Loved it

    Liked by 4 people

  3. chris jensen's avatar

    The sharing of secrets,
    hidden
    within the mind,
    passed
    down,

    made into
    those rhythmic rhymes…

    chris

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  4. mystoryandpets's avatar
    MyLifeandPets

    So flipping deep!! ❤ amazing . greatly worded 👌

    Liked by 4 people

  5. Ali Qureshi's avatar

    You meant ‘stared’ at her own reflection right?

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  6. Ali Qureshi's avatar

    Jacob you know what, whenever I read a post here on WordPress and I like it, I see that mostly you too have already read & liked it. It happens to me a lot, you’re like everywhere!
    Keep it up, keep inspiring others from your work as you inspire me!
    Looking forward to your next post!

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  7. cpluzc's avatar

    Make more clouds

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  8. Abi Faith's avatar

    this is so beautiful

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  9. thebookdrama's avatar

    At this point I like everything before reading it

    Liked by 5 people

  10. Andrew Blair's avatar

    I won’t ever be able to remember it – the first thing that came to my mind was alzheimer’s – which has nothing to do with it does it?

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  12. thAba's avatar

    this is good

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  13. Anita Bacha's avatar

    Short but sweet. I ❤️ Your lines.

    Liked by 1 person

  14. SpindoctorUSA's avatar

    Waiting for Deliver – part 2

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  15. Eugi's avatar

    A lot said in a few words. Well done. Thank you for the follow and it’s nice to meet you.

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  16. erbiage's avatar

    Take care of these words. Delivered like a speech or a baby, who needs to be taken care of. Lovely

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  17. Perviz De Souza's avatar

    Strong words…

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  18. doubtpuppet's avatar

    Intriguing – leaves one wanting to know more.
    There’s a lot of love under your poems. Good to see.
    I’ve been away but now I’m back. Though not sure for how long.

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  19. synergisticshift's avatar
    TJWhiteWolf

    Thank you for this. So beautiful. I enjoy reading your blog. Gives me a smile for my day 🙂

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